Thursday
Cleaned up my proposal, made it presentable. Did the same for my statement.
My proposal is in the form of a power point presentation, i.e. on slide per page when it’s printed. I added some more photos I have taken previously and spaced the text out a little more to allow myslef room to place emphasis on the more important point in it.
Went to see someone about my proposal lin the afternoon, see what advice he had to offer – how to improve my proposal, statement ect.
I need to clean up a few bits here and there, such as more infomation about the positioning of the lights, weather the music in background music or more dominant. But apparently it is okay.
I also need to place more emphasis on the community participation embodying the meaning and representaion behind the cranes.
